Demon: You're doing better The body is still quite long, but the fact that you're practicing so much will definately help you improve!
Bya: Looks rad. Just gotta say, the angle of the face is off compared to the photo. The kid's head in the photo is a bit more slanted. You colored the lips too dark, as well, and the mouth is too high up. Otherwise you're doing great poopchan
the grayscale idea is great btw