Sean longs old manga (and other work)

[Ryousukethehappy]

A manga I did before but never really got to put up I can put up other stuff










other work:

[ram]

I'd like critique mortal but really now you should post the exact image here..

if you don't know how to just right click and copy image location at the image you have then [img]link[/img]

like so
after you do it correctly then you will receive my heavenly guide.

[Shadowsfade]

On the pic Ram linked, I really like the profile view in the second frame

for cnc, the bottom frame of the girl, her body seems to go in very small for her waist, needs to be widened out a little more IMO.

You're very good at getting the emotions portrayed though, good job!

[Ryousukethehappy]

Yeah I agree I have always had problems with drawing girls hahaHA

[ScarletHue]

Yes, on the linked image, her neck seems far too thin. Indeed you should try to direct link images

[Ryousukethehappy]

had a few problems getting the links to show the pictures but I got it added a few extra stuff in there