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    F.E.N.R.I.S. - Collaboration Project

    NOTE: We are still in preliminary stages of the design, by which I mean we are brainstorming :3 don't expect a brilliantly made comic :P


    Anyway this is the thread where myself and Mereana (WhenRabbitsAttack) and Raz (Shnorkel) shall be co-writing a short manga thing feel free to post suggestions and what not to stop it from spiraling into the weird realms of absurdity :L the project isn't planned to be anything large and will probably just be a fun exercise for practice, but you never know what it could evolve into.

    The following three posts I have reserved so I can edit them and keep information up to date maybe with some pictures and extracts from out project and other related stuff



    Contents (Will be beefed up more as the project expands and we have more information to store.)

    Post 1 - Summary
    Post 2 - Chapters, Timeline and Story Extracts (and Story Ideas)
    Post 3 - Concept Art

    F.E.N.R.I.S. Summary

    Project Name: Fenris
    Setting: Floating Islands of the Valorian States
    Date: 2081 AD
    Genre(s): Undecided
    Primary Protagonist(s): Jett, Tyra, Viorell, Llyod, (Hel)
    Secondary Protagonist(s): TBA
    Primary Antagonist(s): Okinsella, Hel, Hati, Skoll, Jörmungandr
    Secondary Antagonist(s): TBA


    Other Ideas

    Idea #1 (Post-Apocalyptic Theme)

    Project Name: To soon to decide
    Setting: Future Earth, A city of sorts?
    Date: 2050-2100
    Genre(s): Undecided
    Primary Protagonist(s): Male and Female Survivor
    Secondary Protagonist(s): Rest of group members + other roles
    Primary Antagonist(s): Hive Queen of weird bug things and the Leader of 'rogue factions'
    Secondary Antagonist(s): The Weird Bug Things
    Vague Description: Set in a future earth where an unknown apocalypse known as 'The Incident' has wiped out most of humanity and a few pockets of civilization remain who are trying desperately to restore order to a world torn by chaos and survive the onslaught of the mysterious [To be names -- Genetic Bug Things]. The story revolves around a group of survivors whom go by the name of [To be named -- if you want] and their exploits as they try to navigate a world of madness and discover what happened all those years ago leading to the creation of the [To be named].

    Idea #2 (Stranded/Shoujo Themes)

    A group of survivors wake up on a beach at the edge of a jungle with no memories of their previous lives. There are no signs of human activity apart from stray surveillance cameras found monitoring the island. The survivors must work together in order to survive the harsh environment they find themselves stuck in, to recover their lost memories and to get to find out the nature of the mysterious surveillance cameras.

    Idea #3 (Oppression Theme)

    Set around the city of 'Tobedecided:3', where the city is segregated into two societies, the Dark Sector and the Metropolis. The Metropolis is the heart of the empire and where the wealthy and powerful reside to enjoy their lives and the Dark Sector is the slums at the outer edge of the cities. From birth Dark Sector residents are seperated into different categories defining there job within 'The Machine' - a large factory built to supply electricity to the Metropolis and to power their amenities. They are split into three classes; Laborers the basic work force tasked with working 'The Machine', the Commanders whom are charged with maintaining order of the workforce and the Maternals, tasked with providing nutrition and other resources to all the workers in the Machine. The story is set around the first uprising of the Dark Sector and their desperate attempt to break free from the oppression of the Metropolis.

    Idea #4 (Disaster/Shoujo Themes)

    Set in a small rural farming town somewhere in tornado valley, America. A group of high school kids have been out of town for a biology trip. When they return to the town, they find it has been completely destroyed by a massive tornado. They explore the broken city, and as they do, a feud develops about whether they should leave the town to go find help or if they should stay and wait. A group split off to try and find help. The story revolves around the group of survivors and the problems they encounter in search for civilization. At the end of the story feuds, new loves, break ups develop but manage to find help and go back to their town to see if the other kids survived: they didn't, and with the tragedy of the incident and the loss of their friends they start to rebuild their broken city with their new found love.

    Idea #5 (Cyborg/Shonen (with bits of Shoujo) Themes)

    Jett is a cyborg labeled F.E.N.R.I.S. who was abducted and had his memory wiped by an anti-government organization. His abilities are sealed using an algorithm called 'Gleipnir'. He was disguised as an ordinary boy by the organization and sent to a foster family, given the name 'Jett'. He grew up thinking he had lost his family and memories in an earthquake that had occurred 11 years prior to the beginning of the story. He is part of a series of cyborgs created to recreate the world anew, beginning Ragnarok. He is the first in the series, and using him two more were created, Hati and Skoll. Jett was assaulted by Hati who managed to break the seal 'Gleipnir', unlocking Jett's abilities and releasing Ragnarok. Tyra, the mysterious girl in his class, actually belongs to the organization who kidnapped him and wiped his memory. She was sent by the organization tasked with keeping an eye on Jett during his highschool years and prevented the seal from being broken.
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    F.E.N.R.I.S. Part 1 of 3

    The story begins with Jett, an ordinary highschool student living in [unnamed city], a floating city in the "Valorian States" in the year 2081 AD.
    On his way home from his part-time work, a mysterious boy looking somewhat his age approaches him in the empty street, and addresses Jett as 'Fenris'. The boy attacks Jett with superhuman strength, and just as the beaten Jett is about to receive the powerful finishing blow, a girl jumps into the scene and deflects it.
    She was a quiet yet very attractive girl from his class, named Tyra; she always made Jett wonder about her.
    Tyra, wielding an odd spear, fought back at the boy who attacked Jett. After a short battle, the injured boy reaches out to Jett and punches right through his chest. Then Jett suddenly goes berserk and unleashes destructive powers at the boy, without being aware of what he is doing. Soon afterwards, the mysterious boy flees, and Jett faints, falling on the floor of the recently destroyed street.

    Jett wakes up in the care of Tyra, with his seemingly fatal wound mostly healed. Tyra admits to him that he is in the center of a government conspiracy, and she was sent to his high-school by an underground anti-government organization known as [organization name], in order to supervise him. She also tells him that he is involved in this because he has 'superhuman traits' but doesn't elaborate on the topic.
    Tyra insists that Jett, for his own safety, stay underground. She introduces him to her organization's members. Among them are Viorell, who belongs to the 'Valkyries', [organization name]'s top Special Forces unit, and Lloyd, the Valkyries' main mechanic and engineer. Jett soon befriends them.

    Four days after his incident with the mysterious boy, on their way to [organization name]'s headquarters, they stumble across a girl who also addresses Jett as 'Fenris'. She introduces herself as 'Skoll', and also notes that she apologizes for her brother's, Hati's, incivility for not introducing himself when he first met Jett 4 days prior. She questions Jett about his memories and physical condition, and attempts to convince Jett to come with her without resistance but for no avail. A battle ensues between them and Skoll. The more the battle intensifies, Jett feels overwhelmed with adrenalin, and as Skoll is about to land a deadly blow on Tyra Jett instinctively uses an unfamiliar power to knock away Skoll and prevent her from hurting Tyra. Impressed, she then begins fighting more viciously and quickly defeats them both. As she is approaching the defeated Jett, she is attacked by the Valkyries and soon gets overpowered by the barrage of attacks, and retreats saying that next time they won't be so lucky.

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    . [ To be added, Jett finding out more about his powers and their nature, telling Tyra about his 'past' and the accident that caused memory loss 11 years prior. Also, some affinity building up between Jet and Tyra]
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    One night, Jett wakes up to find a girl who appears to be around 10 years old sitting on his desk chair. She appears like an ordinary girl, but has bionic prosthetic part of her head and legs. She introduces herself as 'Hel', and declares that she has no intention to harm him, and that she only wants to talk. She begins by explaining to him that he is more than an ordinary human, that he belongs to The Harbingers, that his existence and powers have a very specific purpose, and that he should return to 'father'. Once asked if she is the same as Hati and Skoll, she replies that she is ordered by The Harbingers the same way they are, but that she is "just a regular human, slightly tinkered with". She says that she worries for his safety, and warns him that sticking with Tyra and her organization is very dangerous for him. Afterwards, she climbs out the window and disappears into the night.

    The morning after, Jett tells Tyra about his encounter, and she takes him to the [organization name]'s HQ in order to report it to the higher-ups. Once Jett describes his encounter while omitting Hel's warning about the organization, he is requested to stay in the headquarters and spend the night there for the meantime.

    Unable to fall asleep, Jett goes to the moon pool (reminder: the story is in a floating city) and sits by the poolside to think about Hel's warning. To his surprise, Tyra comes out of the pool next to him, saying she was just doing some swimming and diving. She sits next to him and they talk. She tells Jett how she got into [organization's name] because she wanted to follow the steps of her now deceased father, and that she is happy now that she doesn't need to watch Jett from a distance without any interaction like she had to before. Jett tells her about Hel's warning, and that he doesn't want to believe it to be true. Tyra tells him that it is her duty to protect him and that she will never do anything to harm him. Just before the two kiss, Viorell walks in and interrupts them, when she asks them what are they doing awake so late.

    The day after, as Jett spends his time breathing fresh air on the roof, Hati and Skoll appear and blast him off the roof down to one of the alleyways. Jett attempts to escape and the twins give chase. After a short while of being chased by them, Jett finds himself cornered. They order him to come with them, as he is cornered and outnumbered. Jett refuses, and attacks first using his powers. As they fight, Hati and Skoll begin telling him about his true past. They reveal to him that 11 years prior he was in the center of a covered-up experimental testing of 'The Ragnarok', and that he is living in a lie created by [organization's name]. They explain to him that they address him as 'Fenris' because that is his true name which is an acronym for for 'Fully Enhanced Neohuman Radiopasteurizing System', and that he was actually brought up in a lab while being heavily augmented with bionics. They reveal to him that after the successful testing of 'The Ragnarok', [organization's name] kidnapped him and wiped out his memory using an algorithm named 'Gleipnir', which restricts his powers, and ridding of the restrictions was Hati's purpose when Jett first met him.
    Jett also realizes that he is adopted as he has no sibilings and no pictures of himself younger than 7 years old.
    Feeling shocked and betrayed, Jett asks Hati and Skoll about their goals, and they answer saying that all they do is filling the orders given by 'The Harbingers', by capturing Jett. They continue explaining by telling him that he is the trigger to The Ragnarok, and that when he was an infant he was taken in and augmented by The Harbingers only for that sole purpose.
    Then, the three of them are interrupted by the sound of Tyra's spear falling and clanking on the ground. Tyra was frozen in her spot upon hearing all of this, but the Valkyries that she came with began attacking Hati and Skoll and a battle ensues.
    Jett ran away from the scene, still utterly devastated upon hearing the truth.
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    Concept Art

    To be decided...
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    This goes in the Manga & Anime works section.
    My AA thread - Updated 06/28/14

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    wow you've got so much done! mybe you guys should pick a setting, that might help a little.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bacon_Barbarian View Post
    This goes in the Manga & Anime works section.
    @BB - It is in the Manga & Anime works section?

    @Snooderflubbyguppy - Wow... give us a chance to decide... we're not gonna have it all written out in a day :L

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    @Demonfyre - ya sorry i've had to deal with anoying people today. not you guys other people.

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    No worries its cool

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    This'll probably end up pretty cooly! Can't wait for some actual details!

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    ^ Haha yeah hopefully when Mereana gets on we'll be able to share ideas and actually get a setting :P

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