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    Teen Member Raikov's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by nisaren View Post
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    Ah, thank you ovo. For the first picture I didn't do so cause it's too big uvu'' and I don't want to flood so I put them in spoilers but i use the IMG code for it. Does it not show?

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    So it was the mouth after all uvu'' I keep feeling something's wrong with the faces I draw all the time. I'll try fixing that part and I'll see how it goes on the next picture, thank you!

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    Thank you very much c;

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    did you draw your avatar, raikov? you're a very good artist by the way 80
    i can't see anything structurally wrong apart from what ram said.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhenRabbitsAttack View Post
    did you draw your avatar, raikov? you're a very good artist by the way 80
    i can't see anything structurally wrong apart from what ram said.
    My avatar is drawn by chisuukei, and thank you very much v;

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    I really like the character design of that pic you linked me the only things I can see are what's already been said, about the mouth too low, and the lower leg being a bit thin. I also think that maybe on the arm on (our) right, the line at the elbow showing the bend of the arm is maybe too long, for the position of the hand - when I put my arm in that position, the line didn't seem to go quite so far across.

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    999 Knights Member Gedeon's Avatar
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    I cannot see your drawings OAO
    Problem?
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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