Raikov's critique thread
Hello \o/ Please critique my work?
Some are quite old ;v;'' but this is all the art I can find sitting around in my computer. The one on the lower right is a collaboration with a friend of mine, I did the face.
EDIT: Some people might find it that I might me "showing off my work" But I want critiques on my artstyle and my art in GENERAL, and not just one piece of work, because My stuff are usually quite consistent, and I don't get to finish much.
Last edited by Raikov; 06-09-2012 at 10:50 AM.
Found another one o/
This is pretty old ;_;
Three Trio Tres Member
It looks really nice! I would like to see a full/finished piece if you've got any
Oh, and someone is going to say this, might as well be me: click on the edit-button on one of your posts if you want to add something, that way you don't have to make a double post
Thank you I'll have to search around my computer for anything else.
Sorry about the double-post. If I make any other post do I add it on or new post?
Edit: New picture o/
Somewhat nsfw(indecent clothing(?))
nicely done lines, but I think the legs are too thin, and also too short.
Originally Posted by Raikov
Ah, here's the direct link to the newest one link, and thank you very much!~
Originally Posted by Shadowsfade
Thank you o/ I'll try to work more on the legs on my next picture.
Originally Posted by ram
I cant seem to see either of the pics in your spoilers
and whether you do a new post or edit it kinda depends on the length of time - if you're doing a new post like on the same day or a day later and no one has had a comment yet, edit, if its been like a week or a month or whatever, then just do a new one, doesnt matter if you have then double posted coz a long time passed so
from the first pic though, i really like how you draw hair, nice and flowy
Very nice stuff. Your style reminds me of Ippus on deviantart. Not much else to add for now, but it would be helpful if you could post the pictures so they show up here rather than just links. :X Keep up the good work.
Your detailing on faces is very good, but I can't help feeling you're placing the mouth too low in relation to the nose. If you're doing work which is very stylised (like the girl in the top left of the first picture), it's not such an issue, but as most of your faces are realistic, it's making the jaw look stunted.
It's not a big deal, but I'd recommend either leaving a little less space between the bottom of the nose and the upper lip or (in the case of your most recent picture, for example) even just making the mouth a bit narrower.
Ah, thank you ovo. For the first picture I didn't do so cause it's too big uvu'' and I don't want to flood so I put them in spoilers but i use the IMG code for it. Does it not show?
Originally Posted by nisaren
So it was the mouth after all uvu'' I keep feeling something's wrong with the faces I draw all the time. I'll try fixing that part and I'll see how it goes on the next picture, thank you!
Originally Posted by Gaff
Thank you very much c;
Originally Posted by Demonfyre