Demon's Critique Collection

[Demonfyre]

Original Characters


Total Number of OC's: 3


*OUTDATED*

Eternal/echo

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Karis

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Libra

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Graphic Novel Stuff

Current Projects: Genome and Collaboration with WhenRabbitsAttack (Mereana) and Shnorkel (Raz)

[JJJorgie]

I like pencil and paper better, too! I just recently bought a super cheap $20 tablet, but I'm not too good, yet.

The first and third pictures, the arms are too skinny and the hands are too small.
The second picture, you should make the pockets bigger and more to the sides and thicken the wrists.

Hope this helped! You're doing a FABULOUS job! Keep up the good work!

[Demonfyre]

Thanks for the swift reply! Yeah I noticed and it has been pointed out to me on many occasions that arms are too thin or too thick :L more practice is needed I guess.

May I ask how long have you been using your tablet and would be worth my time getting one?


http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...nalabove-1.jpg


http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...MaleFull-1.jpg


http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...wEternal-1.jpg

[JJJorgie]

If I were you, I'd get a really cheap one to try it out first! I have a $20 Digi Pro 640 from Amazon.com that I really like.

[Demonfyre]

Oh ok I'll go look into that in the morning, i'm sure I can find some stray monies somewhere I can use to get one.

[ClockHand]

First Picture. The boobs are not in perspective, creating a weird volume.

[Rainbow_Dash]

You should link them from this websites gallery. It's more compatible for people using school laptops of which have blocked image hosts. I would love to see your art.

[Demonfyre]

@ClockHand - Oh I see what you mean, i'll probably try that pose again soon and try to fix that.

@Rainbow_Dash - I'll edit the post and add some links underneath the pictures sorry I never realized that they would get blocked :L

Let me know if your school blocks the photobucket pictures.

[trilokcool3]

First pic
umm... Eyes at current state is for frontal (front) view . Her face is angled (like 3/4 or something) so her eyes too need to get angled according to her face .
Loving the 3rd image.

[Demonfyre]

http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...alColoured.jpg


This was the new picture I finished today I think I rectified the problems with the breasts and eyes :L

I also attempted some colouring with good old colouring pencils :L may as well get used to colouring for when I start rendering :P also please excuse the lack of flesh colours :L I couldn't find any pencils which would allow me to make it look 'normal', i'll soon find some and fix that