Demon's Critique Collection

**WhenRabbitsAttack** · 07-05-2012, 10:24 PM

cool

**JJJorgie** · 07-06-2012, 01:52 AM

This isn't a redline. I'm just trying to make my critique clearer by pointing something out.

The line I made is referring to the folds in the sleeve. The bottom one is too long. The top fold makes it look as if the shoulder and arm is detached from the rest of the body. and the slight dip right before the shoulder doesn't help. I don't know if this will help, so tell me if I need to explain it differently. Keep up the good work.

**Demonfyre** · 07-07-2012, 06:30 PM

Toph Fanart

Finished

**JJJorgie** · 07-07-2012, 08:23 PM

Nicely done! There's only one small thing I see that's a little wierd. On the farther arm, the forearm is a little too thick compared to the upper portion.

**Demonfyre** · 07-07-2012, 10:08 PM

@JJ - Thanks

I'll fix that arm up in the morning

Hopefully I should be able to post up my first colour render of Eternal in quite some time which will go towards the banner project if it is good enough

**Kodos** · 07-08-2012, 12:01 AM

Toph, AKA: The Best Character.

Looks pretty cool to me.

**Shadowsfade** · 07-08-2012, 05:57 AM

That's a really nice pose, good to see you change it up a little, and i'm in love with those hands and feet

**Matt** · 07-08-2012, 07:26 AM

Toph was always my favorite character too. Her and Zuko.

At this angle, I think you may want to shave a bit off our right of her face. Either that or move her eyes closer to that side just a bit.

**Demonfyre** · 07-08-2012, 07:41 AM

Thank you all for posting

@Kodos - Ikr, she is easily the best character xD

@Shadowsfade - Thanks, the hands were nightmarish to draw, even with references to help :L

@matt - Ok I'll do that

and yeah Zuko is awesome too, may attempt a fanart of him in his Fire Nation armour or something