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    I like the 2nd one the best :P Looks more traditional and fanzy. The first one are a little too... empty on the top. If you changed the font on the top or add some symbols in the corners, it would be better balanced :P

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    i also like the second one best :3

    i think it would look cooler if genome ran down the side like this though:
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    and everything else goes where it was before.BTW well done on eternal's hands james! they looked very good!

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    Agree on the alignment! It looks better vertical :P

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    thank you :3

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    Ah ok awesome I'll switch the Genome round thanks for the feedback guys I'll fix up those mistakes now and get started on the lineart


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    Fixed up

    Last edited by Demonfyre; 06-30-2012 at 09:23 AM.
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    there's only one correction i can see that should be made: eternal's (her) right boob should come up past her arm pit like that.
    the muscles below the breast connect to her armpit, so the folds at the bottom of the breast should be attached to her armpit as well

    like this


    do you se how the line of the breast follows up to her arm? this is the line eternal's chest should follow too.
    am i making sense?

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    Yeah I think so, not sure how i'm going to edit in though :/ thanks for checking it over

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    nice to see some detail on ryan's shoe ;P

    this looks good, though i think that the folds of the t-shirts could be made slightly darker, as they almost appear like patterns on their shirts.

    BTW, would you mind if i drew my interpretation of your characters?
    it would be fun

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhenRabbitsAttack View Post
    nice to see some detail on ryan's shoe ;P

    this looks good, though i think that the folds of the t-shirts could be made slightly darker, as they almost appear like patterns on their shirts.

    BTW, would you mind if i drew my interpretation of your characters?
    it would be fun
    Okay, i'll darken the clothing folds up a bit, it was an experiment to see if they would look better or not and sure go ahead, do remember that they are OC's and they aren't just random characters though :L

    I'll start colouring tomorrow also I decided i'll probably do a character profile for each as well just because I haven't really released any info on my Genome project, may as well start now
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    of course i'll respect that they're your orginal characters.

    just think of it as fanart

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