@Reg - Thanks very much! Yeah I would agree with the breasts and I will make sure to keep in mind shadows created by the body itself!
@Clock - Thank you! Yeah studying male/female anatomy has been incredibly useful so I will do the same for the human face and headI have begun to notice that my heads are quite restricted like you mentioned after looking back
thanks again and I will keep that in mind!
@Cloudy - Thanks ^_^
A new pose that I hadn't tried beforeit also helps if you don't forget the character you are drawing wears a skirt >.>'
I realise that the feet are a bit wrong and so are the toes, im working on them right now
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The toes should not be that pronounced; if anything, there should only be a continuous curving outline indicating the tips of the toes. Also, the socks should have some creases or folds; it looks lie there are just two stripes on her calves, not socks.
Very cute, though! Great job!!
Like what i said in da, you make wonderful panty shotsbesides that, your perseverance inspires me too. keep up the good work demonfyre hope to see more from you
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@JJ - Thanks, fixing
@BV - Why thank you, I will make some more for you :3
Too tired to say much else.
Sword - Messed up, doesn't look like it's on angle, need to fix
Foot/leg - Forgot to shade and to add ankles >:U
Any more critiques would be incredibly helpful! Anyway, goodnight
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The stuff you've drawn lately feel much more dynamic and interesting than it did just a few weeks ago =)
In this last one, the top of the torso is very flat. Try to box it out and you'll probably figure it out.
I also think that it's time for you to study up on hands and feet. They're a bit behind the rest of your anatomical knowledge.
^What he said. your body anatomy GREAT....hands and feet....kinda good but the joints look wacky. Completly agreeing with Rubi.
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Like what i said in da, your artworks are always clean. I love the sketching style. Poses are getting better and better, although I'm anticipating more of your originals. I hope to see more of that.
I know hands and feet are troublesome. I'm still studying them as well. Aside from that, fantastic job!
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@Rub - Thanks! I did what you said and I think I found the problem
@Ged - Thank you very much!
@BV - Thanks
Just something i've been working on for a bit, I think i've messed up the anatomy of her crotch and legs but i'm not really that sure to be honest :/
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WOAH! nice pose anatomy you got there! her right leg (knee up) may be a bit too long. Her crotch looks fine to me. Carry on with the foreshortening, i think it works
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was the pic in post #454 done in you're sketchbook, or on the compy?
You are showing progress good job.
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