@eltoroguaco - Thanks and yeah there is still plenty to improve upon :L I love the way you colour and design clothing i've learnt a lot from your designs

@WhenRabbitsAttack - Yeah that wasn't my attempt at anatomy, if it was it would most likely have been disastrous :S i'll try to fix the thickness of the arms definitely not the best arms I have ever drawn unfortunately :/

Ok i'll make note of that next time I draw out a manga character and practice anatomy


Oh and it is official! I finally found the pressure tool on SAI :L maybe this line art will look better than previous attempts :3