Demon's Critique Collection

[Mr_Liebe]

I try to restrain myself from kicking, or punching things.... as to prevent me parents from signing me up for anger managemnt classes.

[Shadowsfade]

I think what mainly makes it look like he's standing straight on is the collar thing at the top - im assuming it goes to a point in the middle, as that would be normal :P so if he's facing slightly to the side, you have to adjust the perspective of where it comes to a point too - you've still drawn it in the middle of his body, whereas it should be further over to the left, where his actual middle would be, if that makes sense

SPOILER! :

E.g. in this picture, see how the lowest point of the cut of the top is over to the right, not the middle. not the best picture, but i think it shows what i mean enough http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-O3GlHcaXJK...+print+crb.jpg

[Demonfyre]

Yeah I did try to move the point slightly to the left a bit, it probably doesn't help that it is hidden for view by the belt thing around him holding up the backpack though, I'll try and move it again to see if I can fix it up

[Hant_iiha_cohacomxoj]

on page 32 - 30/5/12 has the best bod but the last one has the best face and coloring and knees good work very nice

[Demonfyre]

on page 32 - 30/5/12 has the best bod but the last one has the best face and coloring and knees good work very nice

Thanks i'll make sure to work on the bodies

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An art pimp I drew for JJ



Planning on linearting it later as well

[JJJorgie]

That looks really, really great! Thanks so much! I love the hair. In future pictures, make sure the mouth isn't too low. Thanks again!

[Demonfyre]

That looks really, really great! Thanks so much! I love the hair. In future pictures, make sure the mouth isn't too low. Thanks again!

Thanks JJ and your welcome i'm glad you like it and i'll make sure to move the mouth up a bit before linearting it

[JJJorgie]

Oooo, you're linearting her? Awesome!

[Demonfyre]

Oooo, you're linearting her? Awesome!

Yeah I found I really useful guide so hopefully she will be more impressive than previous attempts i'll make sure to message you a copy once it's done

[JJJorgie]

Yeah I found I really useful guide so hopefully she will be more impressive than previous attempts i'll make sure to message you a copy once it's done

I'll be looking forward to it! Will you leave it as a lineart, or use her for coloring practice?