Demon's Critique Collection

[Hant_iiha_cohacomxoj]

no prob and i was like it says ur online y u no respond lol

[Demonfyre]

No idea :L probably because I'm logged in on my iPhone as well but it takes like an hour to load a page with no wifi :L

[Hant_iiha_cohacomxoj]

oh i sent you a message

[Demonfyre]

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I think I messed up with the hands and skirt :L tomorrow I will draw Eternal displaying her cryokinesis for the project

EDIT: hmm... need to make her more evil looking

[JJJorgie]

I think the hands look pretty sweet! You might want to lower the nose a tiny bit and make the neck a little thinner, but that's your call.

[Hant_iiha_cohacomxoj]

it looks good but for a piece to come to life;that's like this, is Lighting/shading,, which i see you did some what and the body doesn't look bad at all= but yes the hands need work also the left foot this is one of your better drawings

[Demonfyre]

@JJ - Thanks and I shall do that

@Ray - Yeah I deliberately left out shading apart from the skirt because it makes it easier to lineart once I get SAI running again thanks and i'll try to fix up the hands and foot

[WhenRabbitsAttack]

make her mouth slightly open-like, a teeny bit- then show one sharp tooth coming out over the corner of her mouth.

that should make her look more evil, besides what i PMed you.

other then that, just what the others said. well done

[Demonfyre]

Thanks, i'll try that to make her more 'deranged' looking and then continue to get SAI working :L

[WhenRabbitsAttack]

are you using free trials?