Demon's Critique Collection

[JJJorgie]

The arms are really thin compared to the body. I think her hips are fine. If you make them any wider, she'll start to look like she has a bubble butt, and from what I understand in the story, she's supposed to be pretty fit.

[Demonfyre]

Thanks JJ

[Demonfyre]

Le Female anatomy and manikin structure practice.

SPOILER! :

and a weird group board inspired me staring at what appears to be Navi :L

[Midori-Midori]

Good job C:
Hmm, for the first anatomy drawing I would say the armpits are placed a bit too high.
Keep practising. ^^ You should try working on your feet and hands.
Cute drawing. C:

[WhenRabbitsAttack]

the groin lines are too high on the first female+ her hips angle out too sharply. the last one is quite good though
the bottom drawing is adorable :3

[Demonfyre]

Thank you both Midori and Mereana good to finally be getting it somewhat right :P

@Midori - Yeah I have been practicing hand poses but it's not appearing to be helping when I try to use it in full body poses, any reasons why this may be?

[Midori-Midori]

Yeah I have the same problem. My reasoning is that when we practise, the hands we draw are bigger than how we would draw them in full bodied picture. So I guess a possible solution is to draw hands is all sorts of sizes.

[Demonfyre]

Ah ok thanks I'll try that out im also gonna attempt to draw the hand pose a couple of times before I put it into my drawing hopefully that will improve them as well

[JJJorgie]

These are looking better each time! The first girl's arms are a little too thin. The second girl's arms need some work (espeially the top one). The third one's neck is really masculine! And, last but not least, the last one's legs could be a hair longer.

[Demonfyre]

Ah I see, I shall fix those up right away thanks for posting

I've started working on a banner for Project Genome nothing too intricate just the two main characters will suffice for now