Demon's Critique Collection

[Demonfyre]

Thank you both, got that noted down. Now for some stuff:-

Asura;


Finished sketch;


WIP;

[JJJorgie]

Lovin that spitfire!

On Eternal: Her shoulders look stiff, I think you should loving the far one. Also, the inner sides of both of her thighs curve oddly.

[whenrabbitsattack2.0]

Eternal: ditto on the thigh thing ^ thigh muscles curve like that,yes, but there is fatty tissue that bulges underneath it.

her ribs appear slightly to wide on (our) left side, the curve of the rip should meet with the shoulder. Her upper arm needs to be a little longer and her waist a little lower. Her face looks awesome though, and the spitfire looks brilliant

Asura: his torso is too long, the general rule of thumb is three heads from the top of the head to the groin. you can lengthen this to threee and a half, but make sure to compensate by making the shoulders a little wider. On shoulders, they do need to be a little wider to have correct proportion in relation to the hips, but the muscle structure looks great I love the wrap/scarf thing, you've gotten the folds spot on, well done (couldn't have done it better myself :P)

[Demonfyre]

@JJ - Jah, I messed up pretty bad all over on that piece, I need to do a leg study

@WRA - I would agree with the legs, I messed up pretty bad on them but personally I think the proportions are ok, I wasn't going for strict Loomis anatomy. Ehm, and on Asura his crotch does come around where you suggest, it's just obscured by the scarves :L also yeah I'll keep an eye out for the shoulder widths. Thanks, it would appear I can sort of draw other stuff now, I just wish my characters would look less crap lol

Thanks both of you.

I will just shove this head sketch here as well;

SPOILER! :

[JJJorgie]

Love the teeth and that nose!!! Trying a new style?

[Demonfyre]

Yeah kind of, just trying out different stuff I guess, gonna try out some anime realism head sketches later as well can't be bothered working on bodies no more xD

[Cloudy]

I really like your recent stuff!

[Demonfyre]

Thank you very much Cloudy ^_^ still nowhere near as awesome as you though :P

[BunnyVoid]

MASTER Asura! :3

style for this is awesome :3 nose may need a little more study but this is already good.
hehehe you really like this guy :3

[Prince of Angels]

Ooooo. I like the scary looking dude, especially the eyes.

All I have to say is ditto to the nose comment. And maybe his ear... it bugs me for some reason, I just can't place why. :3