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    999 Knights Member AlmanacnamedTime's Avatar
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    I like your color palette.
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    Why thank you :3

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    You are welcome.
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    Part of an art trade on DA I spent waaaay to long on this :L


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    Very cute!

    The extended leg looks like it has two knees. Also, the connection of the upper and lower leg doesn't look natural. I think the foot should be turned downward a little bit.

    The hand may look a little better with the fingers spread out.

    Other than that, very nicely done! Super cute!
    Last edited by JJJorgie; 09-10-2012 at 10:56 PM.

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    Hmm overall looks good.
    I think her right arm (our left) is a bit short. May be you should angle it outward a bit .

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    The legs are different sizes even with perspective factored in.
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    @JJ - Thanls and yeah I see what you mean, I will try to fix that up

    @Tk3 - Yeah it's a bit short because it was foreshortened on the reference I used, probably didn't make that clear enough :/ thanks for pointing that out

    @Stan - The left leg in the ref was pointing slight towards us whereas the right leg is held out straight, that's why they don't add up size wise but from now on I will try to make that more clear, thanks for posting

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    Cute. The hand doesn't quite come forward correctly though. The fingers seem a little awkward.
    "The soul has greater need of the ideal than of the real."

    -Victor Hugo

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    @Scarlet - Yeah I see that now, thanks


    Othello, part of an art trade, JJ's character :3


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