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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by WhenRabbitsAttack View Post
    of course i'll respect that they're your orginal characters.

    just think of it as fanart
    Ok, can't wait to see them



    Also some emotions for the emotion chart thing that will fit in somewhere in the project :3



    Still planning to add some more like; Anger and Extreme Happiness

    (eCho will be explained when the times arises )


    EDIT: SAI Trial ran out, may need to spend a few days fixing things up before I can continue with the project >.>'
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    i like "really?' best XD
    made me lol ^-^

    these look good

    try to retain consistency when making model sheets. eCho is slightly larger than the two faces flanking it, and because it makes it seem like you're slightly closer to the character in the middle, it would cause a completed model sheet to look messy.
    her neck changes size, getting larger in "really?' than it was in "shock"

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    Okay, will fix the neck sizes and as for eCho that will be boxed off and sort of separate so it was deliberately a little larger just so the key differences are seen when I finish it (as subtle as they will be) :L and thanks, glad that they look acceptable

    i like "really?' best XD
    made me lol ^-^
    I need to use that expression somewhere in the project :P
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    totally

    have you decide on her personality yet? that could give you a better idea of what kind of expressions to draw.
    this includes weaknesses and strengths. ^-^

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhenRabbitsAttack View Post
    totally

    have you decide on her personality yet? that could give you a better idea of what kind of expressions to draw.
    this includes weaknesses and strengths. ^-^
    I have, only thing is some of the characteristics are a bit cliched at the moment, i'm working on how to make them more unique right now whilst SAI is unusable :L but there is some definite points I want to keep
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    well why don't you PM me her characteristic? i can look over them and see if there's anything i could help with.
    if you decide to post, you can star thetraits you definitely want to keep;

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    i think your faces are too low on the head......if that makes any sense.
    Try moving everything ( eyes, nose, ears, mouth...) more upwards.
    Problem?
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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    @Gedeon - Okay I'll try that with the next set of emotions for the chart thanks for posting

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    don't forget that the body poses can show a lot of emotion i will post a meme that shows this when i get to it

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    Quote Originally Posted by rayiles View Post
    don't forget that the body poses can show a lot of emotion i will post a meme that shows this when i get to it
    I look forward to seeing this meme, thanks

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