Demon's Critique Collection

[Demonfyre]

Ah thanks again for posting ScarletHue I'll make sure to not make the neck too thick next time and ill put put more details on the first character to complete her I'll probably post up the results later. With Harley yeah she is very stereotypical but she is more of a project I've dismissed so I'm happy with her being cliched, if I were to reuse her as in a project again in the future I will definitely find a way to make her more unique though

Thanks

[WhenRabbitsAttack]

hey james, wanted to apologise for arguing with clock on your thread. sorry

i'll promise to stay on topic next time >*:<

[Demonfyre]

Don't worry its cool

[WhenRabbitsAttack]

okay ^_^"

[Demonfyre]

Welcome back by the way :P where did you go? :L

[Demonfyre]

Referenced Poses on GB

[JJJorgie]

On the first, with the way that the front of the upper body connects with the front of the legs, you shouldn't be able to see the right side of the butt. Also, the whole right leg is too low (it looks nice, but it needs to be raised)

For future reference, you should post the actual reference, too, so we have something to compare it to.

Great job with the second!

[Demonfyre]

Ah ok I'll do that from now on thanks for the feedback

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Skoll Sketch:




And some GB Stuff:

SPOILER! :

[WhenRabbitsAttack]

skoll's hips are too thin. and the arms, james. the arms!!
somethings goin on with the eye perspective. i think (her) right eye is too close in.
i like her hair!

in the group board thing her pelvis doesn't follow the perspective.

[Demonfyre]

What about the arms? I followed the circle inside the circle rule, they shouldn't be too thin and Ok I'll need to pay more attention to perspective and I'll fix the hips, thanks for feedback