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    cool

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    This isn't a redline. I'm just trying to make my critique clearer by pointing something out.

    The line I made is referring to the folds in the sleeve. The bottom one is too long. The top fold makes it look as if the shoulder and arm is detached from the rest of the body. and the slight dip right before the shoulder doesn't help. I don't know if this will help, so tell me if I need to explain it differently. Keep up the good work.

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    Toph Fanart



    Finished

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    Nicely done! There's only one small thing I see that's a little wierd. On the farther arm, the forearm is a little too thick compared to the upper portion.

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    @JJ - Thanks I'll fix that arm up in the morning

    Hopefully I should be able to post up my first colour render of Eternal in quite some time which will go towards the banner project if it is good enough

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    Toph, AKA: The Best Character.

    Looks pretty cool to me.

    Do you like big boobs? Dragons? Ninja? Martial arts? Wizards? Then click here and make all your wildest dreams come true!!

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    That's a really nice pose, good to see you change it up a little, and i'm in love with those hands and feet

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    Toph was always my favorite character too. Her and Zuko.

    At this angle, I think you may want to shave a bit off our right of her face. Either that or move her eyes closer to that side just a bit.

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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    Thank you all for posting

    @Kodos - Ikr, she is easily the best character xD

    @Shadowsfade - Thanks, the hands were nightmarish to draw, even with references to help :L

    @matt - Ok I'll do that and yeah Zuko is awesome too, may attempt a fanart of him in his Fire Nation armour or something

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    Eternal Coloured



    Took several days but here Eternal is finally coloured any critiques before I start on Ryan? Also sorry turning it into a JPEG file seems to have decreased the quality quite a bit

    Monthly Progress Meme Thing

    SPOILER! :
    Last edited by Demonfyre; 07-09-2012 at 06:39 PM.

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