Reply With QuoteThanks for the feedback!
Here are two more sketches from today, I got more lying here, but forgot to scan them ^^;
maybe tomorrow.
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wow nice gesture and emotion on the first draw. i like your drawings, characters seem natural. pose possess some fluidity :3
tho you may need to research more on the details... be careful to make cloth like paper... too thin... try looking into more reference pictures to get that depth in clothing... i love the concept so far... now execution just needs to be buffered :3
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Thanks for the feedback!
Here are two more sketches from today, I got more lying here, but forgot to scan them ^^;
maybe tomorrow.
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Last edited by Shindoutou; 05-16-2013 at 07:00 AM.
Osashiburi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep drawing man. Nice to see someone that hasn't surpassed me in my absence.
My Story ThreadOriginally Posted by Mr_Liebe
If you took the time to read this, you can just call me Al, or Stan.
Too cute!
On the first: Try not to curve the shoulders so much (add some width and structure, if that makes sense). Raise the eye on the right just slightly and curve the bottom of that iris to match the other. Raist the mouth and nose a bit. The widths of the forearms and the calfs are different from each other.
On the second: Raise the mouth a little. The far eye should be the same height as the closer one (it's a little shorter). The forearm should be slightly longer than the upperarm (you have it vice versa)
@Al: Okaerinasaiiii!!! And thank you for your kind words xD
@JJJ: Thank you for the tips, I'll pay some more attention to those areas next time.
Some more sketches I did! :3 Spoilers to make it all easier to scroll down
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Another sketchdump!
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Critiques are very welcome, as always
The last two are great! I love them!
On the first, his arms look different lengths and his far eyes is too slanted, throwing the perspective off. On the second, I think the bent leg should start a little higher. On the third, her ear's shape looks unnatural and I think her nose should be more prominent. Fourth, her ear's a bit low and her legs are extremely skinny.
Fifth picture, the eyes should be the same length in height. Sixth drawing, the legs should different lengths; if the far thigh is going to be that much shorter, it should probably be angled out more or something.
Hope these help! Keep up the great work!
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