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    wow nice gesture and emotion on the first draw. i like your drawings, characters seem natural. pose possess some fluidity :3
    tho you may need to research more on the details... be careful to make cloth like paper... too thin... try looking into more reference pictures to get that depth in clothing... i love the concept so far... now execution just needs to be buffered :3
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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    Thanks for the feedback!

    Here are two more sketches from today, I got more lying here, but forgot to scan them ^^;
    maybe tomorrow.
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    Osashiburi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Keep drawing man. Nice to see someone that hasn't surpassed me in my absence.
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    Too cute!

    On the first: Try not to curve the shoulders so much (add some width and structure, if that makes sense). Raise the eye on the right just slightly and curve the bottom of that iris to match the other. Raist the mouth and nose a bit. The widths of the forearms and the calfs are different from each other.

    On the second: Raise the mouth a little. The far eye should be the same height as the closer one (it's a little shorter). The forearm should be slightly longer than the upperarm (you have it vice versa)
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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    @Al: Okaerinasaiiii!!! And thank you for your kind words xD
    @JJJ: Thank you for the tips, I'll pay some more attention to those areas next time.

    Some more sketches I did! :3 Spoilers to make it all easier to scroll down
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    I know her top is not right, but don't know exactly what it is:

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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    Another sketchdump!

    Spoilered to make this page easier to scroll through :P
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    Critiques are very welcome, as always

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    The last two are great! I love them!

    On the first, his arms look different lengths and his far eyes is too slanted, throwing the perspective off. On the second, I think the bent leg should start a little higher. On the third, her ear's shape looks unnatural and I think her nose should be more prominent. Fourth, her ear's a bit low and her legs are extremely skinny.
    Fifth picture, the eyes should be the same length in height. Sixth drawing, the legs should different lengths; if the far thigh is going to be that much shorter, it should probably be angled out more or something.

    Hope these help! Keep up the great work!
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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    Was on holiday in the beautiful Portugal, plenty of anatomy references on the beach there :P
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    Also saw a beautiful magpie, decided to draw it:
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    And some more sketches/studies of random stuff.
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    And some 30-second gestures
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    That's all for now, feel free to point out anything you think might help me improve

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    These are really good, just keep practicing and you will improve fast :>

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    You've got your style down pretty pat! I think the main thing you should focus on is drawing better hands. Yours tend to be neglected compared to the rest of the body, as if rushed or like you don't really know how to draw them in certain positions so you pick a really simple blockish one. I admit that sometimes I do this, too. Try to make a study of hands, like as a daily warmup
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