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Thread: Shindoutou's occasional sketch-dump

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    Sir-Mass-a-Lot Sylux's Avatar
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    super kawaii man I'm lovin' it

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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    Drew this today, and played around a little in photoshop portable. I hope the anatomy is improving

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    This is cute!! The hands are a little too small and her head may be just a bit too big.
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    Looking great!! But I have a few thought I would like to share. Took the liberty of doing a redline to show it!
    Hope this helps, and keep in mind, that the lines I drew, are maybe not how they should be, but are only there to give you the idea. (hope you can read what i wrote :P )
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    I think the head was supposed to be looking up

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    I think the head was supposed to be looking up
    Minor detail..
    The idea was to give him an impression of how big the head should be..

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    oic

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    Well if the head is looking up then the chin could probably benefit from being less pointy and possibly seeing a bit of the underside of the head.

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    Woo thanks Phoenix! That's definitely very clear and helpful.
    Demon also thanks for the tip, I'll keep this all in mind the next time

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    That head position from that particular pose+angle doesn't work out well in manga.

    That head position breaks the style, so you see a lot of manga artists do that pose from profile or from bird's-eye.

    The more extreme the angle, the more it breaks. You'd have to switch more and more into semi-realism to pull that off.

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