super kawaii man I'm lovin' it
Drew this today, and played around a little in photoshop portable. I hope the anatomy is improving
Looking great!! But I have a few thought I would like to share. Took the liberty of doing a redline to show it!
Hope this helps, and keep in mind, that the lines I drew, are maybe not how they should be, but are only there to give you the idea. (hope you can read what i wrote :P )
Well if the head is looking up then the chin could probably benefit from being less pointy and possibly seeing a bit of the underside of the head.
Woo thanks Phoenix! That's definitely very clear and helpful.
Demon also thanks for the tip, I'll keep this all in mind the next time
That head position from that particular pose+angle doesn't work out well in manga.
That head position breaks the style, so you see a lot of manga artists do that pose from profile or from bird's-eye.
The more extreme the angle, the more it breaks. You'd have to switch more and more into semi-realism to pull that off.