Shindoutou's occasional sketch-dump

[Demonfyre]

Awesome that site is brilliant! It's going to be a very useful resource thanks!

EDIT: Lol I see what you mean by NSFW :L

[toast]

The face is totally out of perspective, the arm is WAY long, that back leg is totally massive even though its in the back, etc etc. Why didn't you use a ref, or at least put down perspective guidlines and plan out the whole pose?

[JJJorgie]

I'm pretty sure this is the pose you want:

http://www.posemaniacs.com/archives/1461
To turn it, just click and drag her.

[toast]

Did you even read? I said I couldn't find any reference for this pose. If you could show me a picture like this I would be grateful, but I don't think that would happen.

Yes, I did read. And JJ posted a reference. But if you're going to jump into a complicated pose like that, there's no point in doing it if you don't have a reference to look back on. And again, it doesn't seem like you used perspective guidelines. Just keep that in mind next time

[Shindoutou]

Well, this has been a while!

I've been away from here for a while now, and I think it's high time I got back into drawing again and to not be an ass against toast again..

So here is something I drew today, using this as a loose reference: http://sonohara.donmai.us/data/sampl...ced3f9b836.jpg

SPOILER! :

I have drawn alot actually these past few months, and I got some books on anatomy and such, so I'm working on it right now!

[Sylux]

gj looks goods

[Shindoutou]

thanks, sylux!

Here's another drawing (not shaded yet)

[Demonfyre]

Welcome back Shin :3 it's awesome to see your work again! ^_^

For the sitting girl with the scarf, I think you could put more clothing folds, it is looking a bit bare from that point, also the skirt seems to be a bit flat and unaffected by gravity

For the new one, it looks like the girl to the right facial features aren't properly aligned, and together the arms are a bit linear.

[Shindoutou]

Hey, thanks for the tips, though I don't know what you mean exactly with the linear arms? You mean as they miss curviness? 'Cause I'd agree with that :P

I colored it by the way, since I had nothing to do:

SPOILER! :

[Demonfyre]

Yeah :3 I meant that they are rather cylindrical and the muscle masses they are composed of don't really show ^^;

I'm sure you are aware of what an arm looks like :L but i'm going to put this image here anyway for you;


http://hippie.nu/~unicorn/tut/img/ba...m-muscles.jpeg