I'm starting a manga project that I actually intend to completely go with.

It's hosted here:

It's read left to right.

This is a story loosely based off Cinderella. It has some similarities here and there, but I don't intend to completely stick to the same formula.

At first I started with the idea that it would probably be fairly sketchy, since I'm trying to juggle with school work... Hence, backgrounds and everything was rather messy. But for some reason as I did more pages... the drawings started becoming... less sketchy...

Right now I'm trying to figure out how to pace/flow, panel, composition, and etc.

Please critique to your hearts content.