Page 17 of 35 FirstFirst ... 713141516171819202127 ... LastLast
Results 161 to 170 of 349

Thread: JJJorgie's Realm of Art- Character Design Feedback

  1. #161
    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    1,672
    Thank you very much! I think the PIMP thread will help out with the art block (hopefully)
    Last edited by JJJorgie; 07-03-2012 at 12:02 PM.

  2. #162
    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    1,672
    Here's my first colored tree! Any tips would be greatly appreciated!

  3. #163
    Guest
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Location
    LOTR land. figure it out ;)
    Posts
    1,530
    the knarls and texture of the bark would give it more shading, so it wouldn't look so smooth (unless it's like, an ash tree or something)
    great job, though

  4. #164
    Regular Member Sunny's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2010
    Location
    Pennsylvania
    Posts
    195
    I like it! I'd give it some more twigs and random branches, but the overall shape is very nice.

  5. #165
    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    1,672
    Thanks guys! I'll work on adding more shading to the bark and more branches.

  6. #166
    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    1,672
    Any critiques before I color her would be great!

  7. #167
    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    Capital Wasteland
    Posts
    2,928
    SPOILER! :


    Wow she looks great the only thing I can suggest is on the cuff maybe you could make them a bit larger and show so more of the cuff so it looks like the clothing is separate rather than flowing straight into the skin if that makes any sense I love the hair and the eye patch

    Just say if I need to explain what I suggested better

  8. #168
    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    1,672
    Thanks, I'll do that!

  9. #169
    Guest
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Location
    LOTR land. figure it out ;)
    Posts
    1,530
    her right boob is slightly larger than her left. and the nose and mouth could be moved up sligtly they look to low at the moment

    i like her hair and he rpose is really interesting though :3

  10. #170
    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    1,672
    Thanks for the critique. I noticed the breasts after I posted it when aheaded and fixed it. I'll see what I can do do the mouth and nose.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •