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    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
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    Thanks so much! My New Year's Resolution was actually to be able to draw a manga girl any almost any given pose. I love your drawings, too. Your details are simple, yet make the drawings fantastic.
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    I revised Haran (made the feet bigger, the lines cleaner, the ties more detail, and the bowstring go behind the arm.... and attemped to give the skirt more dimension):


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    Oh yay~! It looks so much better now~! Moving the bowstring behind the arm made a big if not subtle difference. I'm not exactly good with feet so I'm not sure I can say much about them. But good job <3 Reminds me of Dungeons & Dragons for some reason.

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    Haha, thanks, Rin. It's still a far cry from perfect, but I'm getting there!

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    Here's my first drawing for the 100 Theme Challenge. Fire away!


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    You can make the curves better around faces rather than making pointed.
    Try it . And compare it.
    Also work a little bit on hairs too .

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    Quote Originally Posted by trilokcool3 View Post
    You can make the curves better around faces rather than making pointed.
    Try it . And compare it.
    Also work a little bit on hairs too .
    ^ I agree with this.

    Also a little refining on the end of the tail. But your proportions are great >3< I probably should practice them...

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    Thanks both of you! The sketch was more curved, but then came the pen and... but I'll definitely work on my technique!

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    As you are drawing with hand , pen and paper , may be your hand is shaking .
    Some of your outlines says so.
    Make your hands more free . Go for more smooth lines.
    As for the shaking i always go for making blocks, squares , geometrical figures without using scale. So you can try too that might help .

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    I'll definitely try that. i think that i may also need to draw bigger. You can't tell from my psot, but the actual picture is only a few inches big.

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