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    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
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    @James: Thank you Yeah.. that collar bone's a little exaggerated lol. I'll fix it when I line it

    @Nisaren: Agreed! And, about the white colored pencil. I actually knew about that little trick and I did try it for the first picture, but, with my super cheap pencils, after I layered white, I couldn't color any others layers over it and my white picked up random colors and deposited them in unwanted places.

    @Cal: Thanks As far as color picking goes, I'm not that great at it. Whenever I try to get funky with them, everything just looks wrong. But, that's what practice is for, getting better at it! So hopefully, you'll see more variety in the time to come!

    I went back over that latest picture to get a little more understanding. It's still not the best, but I think it looks considerably better.

    The spine's a bit weird I think, though
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    Are those supposed to be the shoulder blades close to her spine?

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    Oui. They're very oddly defined and don't make too much sense
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    Definitely move them up then! There is no way they are attaching to her clavicles if they are that low on her torso! :O


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    Okay, thanks
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    Welcome, the colouring is really nice though

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    Heeey JJ :3 yes! The shading on the hair definitely looks better! The skin also looks much better, although I still think it could use some work but that will just take practice. Also I'm no expert... =-=

    Her actual shoulder looks a little bit wonky, the left one, like it's dislocated? So I dont know if you want to fix it, or if you're just done with this picture. Either way you can see the improvement so, well done my friend!

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    Woah JJ thats looking awesome ;D so much improvement and the shading looks really cool.

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    Whoa, it's been like over half a year since my last post here! Dang...

    Anywho, I'm not asking for anatomical advice or critique. Instead, I'd really like your guys' feedback on the character design itself. What do you like about it? What don't you care for? Does the design appeal to you? And, so on. I had a lot of character design to do before I get started on the actually comic, but I can't continue with my reference sheets until I know the basic design is solid.
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