Reply With QuoteI revised Haran (made the feet bigger, the lines cleaner, the ties more detail, and the bowstring go behind the arm.... and attemped to give the skirt more dimension):
Thanks so much! My New Year's Resolution was actually to be able to draw a manga girl any almost any given pose. I love your drawings, too. Your details are simple, yet make the drawings fantastic.
Last edited by JJJorgie; 04-22-2012 at 11:05 PM.
I revised Haran (made the feet bigger, the lines cleaner, the ties more detail, and the bowstring go behind the arm.... and attemped to give the skirt more dimension):
Oh yay~! It looks so much better now~! Moving the bowstring behind the arm made a big if not subtle difference. I'm not exactly good with feet so I'm not sure I can say much about them. But good job <3 Reminds me of Dungeons & Dragons for some reason.
Haha, thanks, Rin. It's still a far cry from perfect, but I'm getting there!
Here's my first drawing for the 100 Theme Challenge. Fire away!
You can make the curves better around faces rather than making pointed.
Try it . And compare it.
Also work a little bit on hairs too .
^ I agree with this.Originally Posted by trilokcool3
Also a little refining on the end of the tail. But your proportions are great >3< I probably should practice them...
Thanks both of you! The sketch was more curved, but then came the pen and... but I'll definitely work on my technique!
As you are drawing with hand , pen and paper , may be your hand is shaking .
Some of your outlines says so.
Make your hands more free . Go for more smooth lines.
As for the shaking i always go for making blocks, squares , geometrical figures without using scale. So you can try too that might help .
I'll definitely try that. i think that i may also need to draw bigger. You can't tell from my psot, but the actual picture is only a few inches big.
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