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    JJJorgie's Realm of Art- Character Design Feedback

    I mainly do pencil and ink work and my scanner isn't the best, so I apologize in advance for any bad quality.

    Have at it!

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    can't see or there is nothing to see.

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    The string of the bow should be behind the arm.. >.> if it is to be shot properly anyway..

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    I like the character so far. You might want to add a bit of dimension to her skirt, and the ties (make them a little more detailed.) Also, I think the line of her bow hand sticks in just a little too much (the left line.) Proportion wise, it looks pretty good! Clean up the lines a bit (hair and a few other places) and I think she'll be done :3
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    @ Egoslip: Thanks. I originally planned to have the bow strong behind her arm, but my pen slipped.

    @ Blue_Dragon: Thank you for the critiques. I'll make sure to add some detail and clean it up.

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    Proportionally, her feet are a little small in comparison to the rest of her, but other than that, I think it's a good effort.

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    @ Gaff: Thanks. I'll be sure to enlarge them.

    Here's another one. It's pretty sloppy because I did it in the car. Sorry.



    I'm already aware that her right ear isn't attched to her head and that her hands and the shading are crap.

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    eh not too bad, you're getting there

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    Thanks! I'm definitely trying.

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    Your art is so much less sketchy than mine and I love steady lines <3 The angles you are doing are actually the ones I find hardest strangly enough and you are great at getting proportions. I hope we can help each other~! ^3^

    Edit: Also the top ones legs me gusta.

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