Awesome! Thanks! I think the last sketch was the first time I've ever outlined the whole breast; I don't even know why I did.
Here's another picture:
The legs are too short and the legs perspective on the legs and feet is off. Also, the hand's not the best.
Quite a few people have been saying that my art's stiff, but none of them have giving any advice for loosening it up. If you have any suggestions please let me know how I can fix this.