JJJorgie's Realm of Art

[JJJorgie]

I mainly do pencil and ink work and my scanner isn't the best, so I apologize in advance for any bad quality.

Have at it!

[ClockHand]

can't see or there is nothing to see.

[Egoslip]

The string of the bow should be behind the arm.. >.> if it is to be shot properly anyway..

[Blue_Dragon]

I like the character so far. You might want to add a bit of dimension to her skirt, and the ties (make them a little more detailed.) Also, I think the line of her bow hand sticks in just a little too much (the left line.) Proportion wise, it looks pretty good! Clean up the lines a bit (hair and a few other places) and I think she'll be done :3

[JJJorgie]

@ Egoslip: Thanks. I originally planned to have the bow strong behind her arm, but my pen slipped.

@ Blue_Dragon: Thank you for the critiques. I'll make sure to add some detail and clean it up.

[Gaff]

Proportionally, her feet are a little small in comparison to the rest of her, but other than that, I think it's a good effort.

[JJJorgie]

@ Gaff: Thanks. I'll be sure to enlarge them.

Here's another one. It's pretty sloppy because I did it in the car. Sorry.



I'm already aware that her right ear isn't attched to her head and that her hands and the shading are crap.

[Sylux]

eh not too bad, you're getting there

[JJJorgie]

Thanks! I'm definitely trying.

[Rainbow_Dash]

Your art is so much less sketchy than mine and I love steady lines <3 The angles you are doing are actually the ones I find hardest strangly enough and you are great at getting proportions. I hope we can help each other~! ^3^

Edit: Also the top ones legs me gusta.