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    101 Dalmations Member Egoslip's Avatar
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    4-5 point perspective makes me dizzy lol.. but yeah, exactly what Nisaren said. My advice on starting with perspective is just going through the basics. Horizon line, vanishing point... squares & rectangles.. once you understand how the basic process works.. or rather the mechanics.. the actual craft tends to speed up and then there's a few tricks of the trade later on down the road once you get used to basics .

    Keep it up, you got the eye for seeing in 3-D! Good stuff :3

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    One thing I noticed on the kissing picture is their breasts are placed much too high, if you look at photos of girls you will notice that there is quite a large space above girls chests no matter the size of the breasts.

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    Her legs look broken don't they? ;n; This is a commission for a friend on DeviantART and I want it to be perfect. Does anyone know how I can fix the left leg? I find placement difficult.


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    they look too short for her upper body

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    Phew.. Thanks for noticing that.. ;n; .... My body proportioning is so bad I'm gonna cry..

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    Hmm, I'd say you want to add some more bulk to her legs as well. They seem very narrow compared to her torso and it's making her look a bit doll-like. Her left forearm is a smidge too long as well. I like her clothes though; her top in particular is looking good.

    Its a bit taller than your figure there, but have a slightly alarming skinless mannequin, in case it helps any:

    http://www.posemaniacs.com/archives/1355

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    Thankyousomuch! I might have to redraw the legs but I think they might come out well after that hopefully. Although I already coloured it, but I guess recolouring after in edit is less drastic than submitting what I currently have done.. Phew.. And the left arm will be a smidge to fix c: I guess I'm not that perceptive. Hehe.

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    Also, if you stretched both of her legs out straight, her left (our right) leg would be much shorter than the other.

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    OMG... Haha, I can see that now... *cries*

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    There, there, everyone makes mistakes I always use my fingers to find the length of one body part to compare it with the other. it's not the most scientific measuring system, but I find it pretty helpful.

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