Shoujo Rin's Atelier

[Rainbow_Dash]

Ahaa, oh wow, thank you for noticing that @Post #16. That gives me quite a bit to fix up and hopefully it will all turn out, I honestly never would have noticed the problem with the hips and shoulders. And for Post #11, That's basically the first time I've ever done a background with a drawing that wasn't a vector with the pen tool. I could try using a grid and see how it comes out. Thanks for taking the time to write that~.

[Rainbow_Dash]

Here's another thing I've been working on. I went over the initial sketch so it would be more like line art and I was hoping if you could tell me if any of the proportions are out of if anything is misplaced so I can fix it before I colour it. I'm not exactly good at critiquing my own work. Thank you~.

[Rainbow_Dash]

I know it's not the best, but I've never drawn interior before. I tried to go for a smashed up room kind of feel but lack the imagination required to draw a large variety of things. I guess there isn't a lot to critique in this image but it would be nice to get some ideas and suggestions to kick start my membrane.

[JJJorgie]

Better than any perspective work that I've ever done! Though, if you're going for a smashed up room, maybe go for some scratches or cracks on the wall...?

[Rainbow_Dash]

Ooooh, I was going to do that but I'm lazy when it comes to art which is why I sketch. Haha, kidding, I just love the look of sketches, but I'll try it out~! And add some blood! Wahahaha~

[JJJorgie]

Oh yes. Blood's always good!

[Rainbow_Dash]

First drawing I have ever coloured and I'm quite proud of it! I'll keep practising and hopefully be good enough to actually get noticed. I think I need more shading on the skin...

[nisaren]

Hey, nice coloring job. It turned out pretty nicely although I agree that there needs to be more shading on the skin. Pretty awesome for your first attempt.

Looking at your interior drawing in post #23, I really think you need to take the time to study perspective. I added some quick perspective lines over top your piece to give you an idea of what I'm talking about.

[Rainbow_Dash]

Oh thanks! Although I am fairly unfamiliar with perspective and I'm currently learning it in VCD. Sorry! Gotta go!

[nisaren]

No need to apologize. I'm not sure what you mean by "VCD" but learning perspective isn't terribly difficult. Just takes a little practice. It can get a bit complex when you get past 3 point perspective to 4-5 point perspective though.