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    101 Dalmations Member Rainbow_Dash's Avatar
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    Shoujo Rin's Atelier



    It's currently a work in progress and I know I could do better, but it's the first time I've ever drawn an angle like this. I do everything in SAI and very rarely scan paper sketches. What does everyone think? (It's very unlucky to compliment a work in progress, brace yourselves, or me. I should brace myself.)
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    The angle looks great and the eyes are beautiful! Though, I can't really tell what's going on with the arms.

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    have you been playing Katawa Shojo

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    Yes. Yes I have. And thanks Jorgie~. Rin doesn't have arms. Hehe.

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    I love this drawing and I'm very proud of it. But I can't quite pick out what is wrong with it... I see something wrong with the head maybe but I'm not sure. What do you all think?

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    Head's too large. You're doing fine. Keep practicing.

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    Looking good--you tackle odd positions, which isn't easy.

    I agree with Hamachi, the head is a little big...I think it's also sticking out too much (like it's out of line with the neck.) Maybe work on aligning the spine a little bit. Nice details. I think her left foot (our right) should be a little bit bigger, since it's closer to us.

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    Thank you all for the help~! I did notice the left foot on the second one and I'll try to fix it somehow..

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    One thing to add: I think the whole "character with no arms" thing is TOTALLY awesome, but make sure you draw other vcharacters with arms to keep in practice!

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    Thanks Jorgie~! Will post more soon~.

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