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Thread: Hamdrank's art.

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    Redlined. You really hyperextended the right buttocks on the first one.

    Also, you need to have more confidence in your lines.

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    Bacon Barbarian: I'll ink something soon since my sketching isn't coming out too well.

    Joosh: Lol I am not really going to say if i'm that or not, but you can use your imagination.

    Sean Long: I hope I get a new scanner soon for you I tried heighting the contrast but think I did it wrong.

    Cypress: Thanks for the red line I see the right leg is messed up now. Also i'll try being more sketchier and bolder with the next drawing.

    Thanks guys.

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    I am trying to copy Shinkiro's style from now on. Prepare for alot of semi-realistic potraits as I style explore!

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    Ah, since you're going into this kind of style, you definitely need to focus on one thing: CONTRAST. If you observe his work, he uses plenty of contrast and dark, definite lines to create the semi-realistic effect. Here, I've touched this up a bit to show you how effective a bit of contrast + some strong lines can be:


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    Lol I see, I need alot of work. Going to use a B pencil then. Going for a almost fullbody pic next. Thanks going to try to vary the contrast.

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    Just an old sketch to bump my thread, not doing too well with copying Shinkiro atm.

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    I like where your style's going--looks like I'll have another artist to stalk here. Could you draw darker, though? Or at least play with the exposure in Photoshop or Gimp.

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    Thanks Matt I think I darken this one too btw.

    So the copying of his style is going ok, tried to darken it like you guys said. Btw the first one I drew was my own it's Kohaku from Melty Blood. This one is a copy of Athena from KoF; the eyes are a little off. Trying to go like Idnar http://idnar.deviantart.com/ or the original artist http://www.creativeuncut.com/art_capcom-vs-snk-2_a.html or my own spin to it. Linking Shinkiro and Idnar because Shinkiro made the style up and Idnar copied sorta well. Also so you guys can critque me easier.

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    Is there something underneath her ear? Because if there isn't hair there, then you've pretty much cut into her skull.

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    I honestly would give you feedback, but I cannot see a thing. I recommend inking or lowering brightness and raising contrast on your scanning options. I'm sure it is worth critiquing, so I must see it! :S

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