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    This is looking freakin' awesome so far! You already pointed out her foreshortened arm, sooo....I might be wrong, but I feel the leg closest to us is just a little bit too big. In the least, I think her ankle is slightly too thick...but I again, I could be wrong.

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    Thank you

    But yeah, I think you're right about the leg. I'd asked some other people as well and the general consensus seems to be that her legs are too big compared to the torso and head. It doesn't come as a huge surprise - I was struggling to nail that pose from the get go.

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    Usually, when you see the 'Draw This Again' meme, there's a gap of two or three years, right? In true Spinal Tap fashion, mine goes all the way up to eleven.



    Just wish I could remember what she was called.

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    Wow, great improvement!! On the newest, her hands are different sizes and her closer arm is too short.
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    Yeah, I noticed the hands just after I'd posted it, much to my annoyance. I'd missed the arm though, so I'll need to get that sorted as well.

    Cheers

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    I want to call this done as far as the artwork's concerned, but I'm not sure about that logo. Might add black to the bottom of the gradient.


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    Damn, there is nothing un-awesome about that O_O the only thing I think is worth pointing out is that the woman's left arm looks too short. Maybe play about with the foreshortening a bit more to break the illusion?

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    Ah, good call. I was kind of fixated on the right arm to the point where I wasn't really thinking about the left one anymore. I've got the logo to a point where I'm happier with it now, so I'll see if I can sort it out when I go back to change that.

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    Ended up taking work on holiday with me, so decided I'd finish this in a bid to preserve my sanity. Painted entirely on the ipad.



    Originally, she had a flower in her hair, but I couldn't get it to look convincing, so in the end I just dropped it. Could probably do with widening the 'halo' effect more across her shoulders and I've just noticed that errant strand of black coming off her hair...

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    Nice job.
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