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Thread: Anime Rebel's Co-Writing Project

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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    Yeah, I'm fine with the intellectual friend, no problem.

    Will the story lead somewhere, or will it just be random happenings, like a 'slice of life' following Kenji and Charly with their 'adventures'? I think it's best to have some sort of ending in mind while creating a short story as this, so we have something to work towards. Then we can get started on some of the storyboarding.

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    I think the random happening should trigger an event that Charly is orchestrating or something of the like. So it looks like a ton of random stuff, but it's not.
    However, ultimately I believe that the decision should be left to the Bossman.
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    101 Dalmations Member Shindoutou's Avatar
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    I was thinking something like that too. The final word is to the Rebel then.

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    Cool. So Denno, for a codeword, "intour." Also how do you want to go about divvying up the writing?
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    Oh yeah, most assuredly have some sort of an ending in mind, but nothing epic, just you know...keep it light.
    As for Charly---yes. insane people are smart, but I think you should overplay the insane part and downplay the smart part. That way Kenji's friend and Charly would be a lot different.
    For code words---why not try making up some Japanese stuff?

    Here's my idea that I had for divvying up the writing part, but tell me what you think.
    Almanac-writes "episode" one
    Denno-writes episode tw0
    Amanac-three
    (so on and so forth until ten)
    Then you'd send em' to me, I'd preview and suggest changes. (eh, maybe, I might cut this step for time and effort reasons)
    Then Almanac sends his episodes to Denno, and Denno will send your episodes to Amanac. Each of you will preview and edit/revise the other persons, taking VERY careful note of what you've changed. If you don't agree with the changes, you can discuss them here on this thread.
    (I realize that this method could open a can of worms, however, I'm not sure how you can keep the tone and stuff consistent if one author is the sole author of a particular episode.)
    Then send the finals back to me, and I'll go over it and suggest any last changes.
    Viola! (So really it's a three step process, tell me what you think of this idea.)
    I can also send you both the rough layouts that I had in mind for the pages, or you yourselves can do the rough layouts, if you want. I guess we'll see.
    Do you want to finalize a plot before you start?
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    On the subject of Charly, haha! You got it. *salute
    I'm cool with that way of divvying it up.
    You can do the layout roughs.
    I kinda want to see where it goes, but pick an ending first.
    Also I promise to not make any Starwars puns about the Rebel Alliance. It's tempting.
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    Yes, pick an ending first, and then just see what happens in between
    For the rest, I agree with your suggestion for distributing the episodes and all,
    By the way, I'm kinda very short on time this weekend, with gigs, work and easter, so I'll not be on this forum 'till tuesday again.. I might have time to check this thread in the meantime, but I won't be able to write anything yet. (meh, we still need to think of an ending anyway )

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    Ending Idea which sounds crazy:
    Make a giant pit that sucks all cats in it.

    that's all I got for right now. I'll start writing as soon as I get a name for Kenji's bud.
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    how's it coming you all?
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    I'll have it done by saturday, just trying to make it fit.
    something I should mention, I kinda made kenji's friend a female, and the reason she's an intellectual is cuz her dad's a professor, and he's from the states. If you want this changed, now would be good.
    Last edited by AlmanacnamedTime; 04-16-2012 at 01:39 PM.
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