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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    What I would suggest is add more random branches here and there, it's unlikely that a tree would have only two branches (unless its a dwarf tree). Also try using some references to help with the bark and stuff. The references will also help when it comes to colouring it

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    Yeah, is the plan. It's just a WIP so I'm not so worried yet.

    ART DUMP.
    Innocence for Guaco's weekly challenge.
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    OC Sarah Hess, in winter clothes.
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    Kupo707-style kitty.
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    Running person
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    Sedgwick's head.
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    With those head sketches I think you have placed the eyes a bit too far up the face, and with the running bipedal you have made the leg quite blocky and I think you would also get some foreshortening towards the top of the leg as it is moving in towards the body. Nice work man

    Also the Kupo sketch appears to be broken, i've tried to view it a couple of times but it comes up broken :/

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    Link fixed. Yeah I noticed the eyes. /gimp mwahaha.

    Hey also if you want to see me draw anything go ahead and say so.
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    Haha I love the Kupo :3 I think you should add a slight indication of the right inner ear though, you missed it out. Even though the face is turned you should still see a bit right at the edge.

    I made a suggestion on the Spam thread :3

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    Will do sexy next(since only one person reads this he gets freedom to request a thingy).

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    The perspective isn't too bad at all I'd suggest using a ruler for straighter lines and adding more shading (especially aroung the door so it doesn't look so flat)

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    Hi again.

    All of these are drawn within 5 minutes


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    Also I will be doing a little 4-koma thing I think. Prolly 2 pages. Ish.
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    Your drawings are looking pretty flat. When you want to do a super quick sketch, focus on the basic shapes and forms first, THEN add detail.
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