Page 2 of 2 FirstFirst 12
Results 11 to 15 of 15

Thread: Help i need a critique on the manga that im planning to do

  1. #11
    Senior Member trilokcool3's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    india
    Posts
    450
    Ok
    first very important your story will mainly depend on the events, and a group of loosers about how they will struggle, and the opposite force how they gonna stop this game mainly .
    Abt the events yes it should be very very much conceptual, complexe and interesting. And thats where you should concentrate. Events made should be life worthy .
    It seems that your concept will make your story complex.
    Wishing you luck .

  2. #12
    Quote Originally Posted by trilokcool3 View Post
    Ok
    first very important your story will mainly depend on the events, and a group of loosers about how they will struggle, and the opposite force how they gonna stop this game mainly .
    Abt the events yes it should be very very much conceptual, complexe and interesting. And thats where you should concentrate. Events made should be life worthy .
    It seems that your concept will make your story complex.
    Wishing you luck .
    thanks for the comment sir it really helps.

  3. #13
    101 Dalmations Member Rainbow_Dash's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Posts
    144
    I actually like this concept. The first part with the dog struck me as a little strange but the big picture appears to be very cliché and very unique at the same time. (Will post a longer critique momentarily.)

  4. #14
    Guest
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Location
    LOTR land. figure it out ;)
    Posts
    1,530
    i like the idea, but it probably needs more refining. i think it would be good if you made it so only certain events were betable. other wise the game would be hard to regulate.

  5. #15
    actually i already renovated the plot on how it works because its hard for me to think some on the spot events such as that dog thingy.i will put a referee or sumting and he's the one who will gave an idea on how the two ppls will fight and after i watch kaiji i will put more tense on this story like playing with dice too cards etc etc

    all i need to do is to sharpen my drawing and some time to draw a manuscript

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •