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    Ying Yang Member Japxican's Avatar
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    Japxican: Critique this drawing?

    I know there's a little tweaking that could be done to the hand, but I was mostly practicing my shading. Any suggestions on how to make it better? Anything I did really well? Thoughts, please.

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    Teacup Ninja Tots Cloudy's Avatar
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    Hey Japxican, can you please rename your thread so it contains your forum name thanks!

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    Ying Yang Member Japxican's Avatar
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    How do I do that? A little technologically challenged here...
    I am so not typing anything interesting...

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    Omg !! Ja...px *speechless*
    when did u... !!! Learning secretly hmmm....
    Nvm
    looks awesome , shades are awesome and only cofusion that i see is fairy's head became bigger .

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    999 Knights Member Gedeon's Avatar
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    Awesome. The shading is perfect and realistic.....unlike the eye. So it kinda bugs me.....not that you should be concerned about that.
    ITs just that as i said you've nailed the shading but the eye kinda blows it all with its cute style. The little fairy too.... although its cute i think you could try and do more realistic stuff. Again thats just what i think if you like your style the way it is now then by all means continue. Also the hand is....blobby? I think the three fingers behind are .....too fat.
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    Junior Member Chuchu's Avatar
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    Wow! I've always wanted to shade like that, I know it takes some practice, so I commend you on that! The hand seems a little on the thick side. The face is really well shaded but there's something about that seems a tad bit off, maybe the length of the face or hair.

    But it's really lovely, I want to see more from you soon~

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    Ying Yang Member Japxican's Avatar
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    @trilokcool - I used to always have trouble with drawing big heads. Thx for the input.

    @gedeon - thx for the critique. I'm awful with doing realism; cartooning's more my style, but I'll keep that in mind.

    @Chuchu - I don't see what's off about the face, but I agree about the hand. Hands are a bit of a tough one for me.

    Thanks for the critiques! I'll be sure to upload more so I can improve.
    I am so not typing anything interesting...

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    Ying Yang Member Japxican's Avatar
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    Am I allowed to double post in my own art thread? Someone please tell me.

    I've been practicing my digital art. I use a mouse for colouring, which has its challenges, but I'm actually kinda happy with this one. Please tell me what you think.



    And if I'm in the wrong for double posting, I deeply apologize. My thread's been pretty old for a while.
    I am so not typing anything interesting...

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    I really like this! Great coloring job! I have no critiques.

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    Awesome!!
    That superhero suit just kind of reminds me of elastic girl from movie ''Mr incredible''.
    Nice coloring . Nice work .

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