You did. This goes in Artist's Alley. I'll move it for ya, though.
Mangaworks is for actually *making* manga. Artist Alley is for posting and getting feedback on your non-manga art. And the anime section is for actually *discussing* manga and anime.
EDIT: And I'm no artist, and I hate Sasuke, but that looks pretty good to me. :3
EDIT THE SECOND: Critique Corner, not Artist Alley. I'm still used to the olden names. Also I changed the thread title for you because you're supposed to have something distinct/identifying. Feel free to change to something else, just as long as people know "this be portogas' art!"