Sunny's Art Haven

**Sunny** · 12-18-2011, 01:05 AM

I don't think I posted a thread a long time ago...but I don't know because it's been a while, and also, I didn't seem to see it.

Anyway, any thoughts on these?

I know the eye is bugged out here:

**Cloudy** · 12-18-2011, 01:20 AM

I freaking love the colouring shading and everything, the one thing that stood out to me as off the right eye (her left out right) it is smaller than the other eye and also a bit too close together with the other eye. your picture looks pretty much finished so for future reference try mirroring the image in the art program you use so you can see whats odd.

**Sunny** · 12-18-2011, 01:26 AM

I actually do mirror stuff but for some reason, I couldn't get that eye right. That and I don't really understand Painter.

I also noticed her ears are off.

**Cloudy** · 12-18-2011, 01:28 AM

the left ear maybe is facing like its poking out from her head, where as it should look a little flatter like the other.

**Sunny** · 12-18-2011, 01:44 AM

Her ear is the right size according to the ref, but it's totally off in regards to the placement. I think the nostrils are a bit too big, too.

**Sunny** · 12-19-2011, 01:24 AM

That one eye is totally wonky. Anyone see anything else?

**Cloudy** · 12-19-2011, 01:37 AM

nope she looks pretty nice to me

**GunZet** · 12-19-2011, 02:10 AM

I would either bring her nose a bit further to the left, along with her lips. Or move a bit of the left cheek inwards. The right eye pupil also seems a bit large compared to the left.
Other than that stuff, I love this piece, the colors are awesome, and the texture is just great. Everything works out pretty good, but I wonder what'd happen if you threw in a bit more contrast on shadowed areas of the face.