Help with Cover Colors - another one

[Evil_Cake]

I am coloring this cover page, kinda... mostly just by changing color balance and levels in certain areas.

Any suggestions on how to make it better? Like color ideas ect? I already plan 2 make the title lighter so it stands out from the hair, and maybe straighten the letters out somehow.

[corastaur]

I like the idea of a slightly lighter title. Also if you wanted to I think adding some more shading, especially to the shirt, would make it stand out more really like the color choices and her expression haha it's awesome

[Evil_Cake]

thx I will try that

[Evil_Cake]

is this an improvement

[Bacon_Barbarian]

The contrast definitely is, yes.

[corastaur]

Yeah definitely

[Evil_Cake]

I have another colored cover : \ I tried to color it using the same method as the last, but it didnt work because I cleaned it a little -_-'

Dont like this much so suggestions are mega welcome

[SuperKasey]

I feel like bright colors are making things pop in weird places. It seems that it's a darker scene so having her skin tone desaturated and darker like that is fine, but then the eye is drawn right to her hands so fast it's a little jarring @.@ Maybe bring them down a few notches so that they blend more with the picture and if you want them to pop add a few highlights.