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    Anatomy help?

    I'd like some criticism on what's wrong with this picture. I'm not too proud of it... I'd also like some tips, too!

    http://www.mangatutorials.com/index....icate/kaiser2/

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    Palindrome Member ClockHand's Avatar
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    Please, post the images. It's better than posting a link.

    You need to work in anatomy. One shoulder is wider than the other, one arm is longer than other and hands are quiet small. You could also work more in the pose to make it more believable and the same with muscles. Practice with human anatomy.

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    What clock said is pretty much what I saw in the picture. take a look at our huge tutorial list and draw from life to get the body looking more accurate Tutorial List

    also please take a look at the rule thread Crtiique thread Rules

    Please add your name to the thread title so people know straight away this is your crit thread.

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    tis be too flat. you are thinking/ imagining too much in the 2d space and what is on the paper. Think more about the image as it rotates in your mind.

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