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    999 Knights Member Gedeon's Avatar
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    oh my.....well this is new.

    Firstly....whats up with the nipples? Also the part around the hip bone and the rib cage...actually the waist part....i think the hip bone should be more pronounced. other then that....pretty nice.
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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    x23? if so, cool beaners =D

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    1. I think that line is suppose to be apart of the back boob, but in reality there wouldn't be a crease like that, or at least it wouldn't be so high. Boobs don't start up thar

    2. The line going down the stomach should be more aligned with the middle of her breasts. Maybe more curved than my redline, but yeah. Also you should indicate the other half of the ribcage as well.

    3. Her hip wouldn't be as straight when in that position. My redline of it is pretty shitty, but it's essentially just to show you what I mean. I think it'd actually be a bit higher.

    4. This is kind of just nitpicking but how come the claws go outwards like that

    Otherwise, great colours and lineart as ~always~ ;D

    Firstly....whats up with the nipples?
    Big and they kind of look inverted. Nothing wrong with them, it's just an artistic choice. They aren't unrealistic

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    999 Knights Member Gedeon's Avatar
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    Actually the size isnt the problem. As you stated its realistic.... but i must admit i never had seen ''inverted'' nipples..... and i watched a lot of porn.
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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    oh man they're actually quite common. nsfw: https://www.google.com/search?num=10...ac.E8e7m-pWcE0

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    Thanks Toast and Ged! I redraw that hip so many times, I had at one point had a version that would've more correct, don't remember why I erased it. I'm gonna do some anatomical studies to work on my deficiencies. And thanks for the crits Toast! You'r not being nitpicky at all, I didn't notice how awkward the claws were until I was already coloring.



    But there is a penis involved in this drawing, but I'll go ahead and just keep that part on tumblr.

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    you have a tumblr?

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    followin both :B

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    ^^^^ ditto

    such good lineart on this newest piece holy JEEZ

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    You be so damn good, the lineart is stunning and definitely amongst the best i've seen :O

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