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    Sparky The Creator[NUDITY(kinda) ON PAGE 44]

    Lookin' for crits, she's sitting, not on anything in particular at the moment though.
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    I love how clean your lines are, and you do a good job at adding thickness where necessary.

    I have bit of qualm with the toes, they are a little bit too thin, I think, and a little too finger like (if that makes sense.) Also, the left leg (her right, our left) is turned a bit awkard. Looks a uncomfortable. The right foot (her left, our right) is a little off, too, though I can't explain it. I think it's a little too big (wide...I can't describe this well. Epic fail on my part.)

    I love the design. Her clothes are well done, with appropriate wrinkles, and proportions are good. One question, since I can't make the picture larger: does she have something in her mouth? I can't tell without getting a closer look.

    I like her hair, as well. Overall, this is really good
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    Thanks for the heads up, I made some adjustments to the feet, unfortunately they don't amount to much in the final illo.


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    your style is oh so interesting, love the clean lines. The last one reminds me alot of graffiti stuff which makes me love it.

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    Thank ya! Graffiti stuff is something I'm working on.

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    That design on the jacket is cool

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    I love the clean lining and facial expressions.

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    Hayashida: I cheated to make it.

    Pwhit: Thanks!

    Feel free to Crit you guys.

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    Cool stuff Sparky-J! You've definitely got some great line art as everyone has pretty much mentioned already. Regarding your latest image above.... all I can say is that his chest looks lopsided - like the one side on the right looks a little too low.

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    Thanks Rio! I was in a dark place on that day and only drew that guy because it's February and I have to draw something everyday. The only thing I like on him is his gunch face, so I'm rework his whole thing.

    A character I've been mulling around on for a while, he has a world and everything. Dudes a treasure hunter/monster killer/titty inspector.

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