Ooooh. Getting to some Crunch now are we? (Not that the cheese wasn't delicious.)
Keep "Voidborn".
Use "Obsolete" again.
Use "Sleeping Dogs".
@Sean Long; Thanks man! -And yeah, ship designs are difficult. The best advice I can give is to consider the overall shape of the ship before breaking it up into little bits with detail...
Also, if you mean the guy in the russian hat... He was my avatar for years, lul. How long you been lurking MT?... If you mean from somewhere else, I really hope he isn't too similar. x_x
@C-Fox; Again, talking about russian hat guy? "Gharl" appreciates this if so. :3
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Double also, new pages!... with terrible toning. But yeah, I have to save some stamina. Might come back to these later...
Page 16;
Page 17;
Page 18;
Page 19;
Added into first page post for convienence, too.
Ooooh. Getting to some Crunch now are we? (Not that the cheese wasn't delicious.)
Minor bitching because I'm an English Nazi: Enhanced, not Inhanced.
Otherwise, awesome stuff, Regfish. I love the facial expressions
@ Bacon; You betcha. It may be page 19 already, but these characters WILL actually get names soon... x_x
@ Kodos; Fixed. Much appreciation for the critique and the comment Kodosguy. :3
Just working on a new version of the 1st chapter cover. Dunno if I like it. What do you guys think? :m
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Last edited by Regantor; 01-21-2011 at 06:20 PM.
Awesome face, awesome boobs, awesome everything. @_@ Kodos heartily approves.
hmm so far I like it more
with the current one it is hard to tell whats going on except for the face
Alright. Thanks for the imput, guys... :3
I agree that the first one was way too dark, and was just sorta an acended concept sketch anyway. If I can fix her chin a bit more I'll probally potatoshop this one and use it.
More pages soonish, too. ;I
btw on page 18's last panel.. I think some extra line weight on Ranst would help him stick out more and make the panel way good
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