View Poll Results: Might change the name. What sounds better in your opinion?

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  • Keep "Voidborn".

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  • Use "Obsolete" again.

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  • Use "Sleeping Dogs".

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Thread: -Voidborn- {Three new pages. "Wow, I'm real! My gosh! I can winnn~! >:o"}

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    999 Knights Member Regantor's Avatar
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    -Voidborn- {Three new pages. "Wow, I'm real! My gosh! I can winnn~! >:o"}



    -Voidborn has a smackjeeves site here, yo. :o-

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    Hey again guys. The pet project lives on. Figured I'd move it to the new forum for convience.

    As always comments, harsh critique, or even just speculation are mega appreaciated. :3

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    It's the far future. The human race has grown, spread through the stars, then become a boogeyman story for aliens to scare their naughty children with. Mastering influx travel and smashing planets with ease, the human-decended "Voidborn" live entirely in space, jealously protecting the last pockets of the human race from natural extintion by annihilating every alien species in their way.

    Much to their chargin, not all humans agree with this policy, however. The pocket carrier "Diamondback", and it's newly formed replacement crew, is sent to irradicate this crime of thought before it spreads too far into their own ranks...


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    Fifty Fifty Member Bacon_Barbarian's Avatar
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    LOL Figurehead as a Title. :P

    It's nice to have all 15 pages in the first post. Is this on the place where Obsolete was too?

    *Needs more pages before he can comment on the plot*

    In the last panel of the lates page, it doesn't look like his mouth is pen, but that he has really big lips. Also the people who are soluting have odd costumes. They appear to be baggy (due to the folds), but if they are in fact baggy, then these people are insanely skinny.
    Last edited by Bacon_Barbarian; 01-09-2011 at 05:54 PM.

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    Bad Enough Dude to Rescue the President Kodos's Avatar
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    Fuck year!

    Do you like big boobs? Dragons? Ninja? Martial arts? Wizards? Then click here and make all your wildest dreams come true!!

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    999 Knights Member Regantor's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bacon_Barbarian View Post
    LOL Figurehead as a Title. :P

    It's nice to have all 15 pages in the first post. Is this on the place where Obsolete was too?

    *Needs more pages before he can comment on the plot*

    In the last panel of the lates page, it doesn't look like his mouth is pen, but that he has really big lips. Also the people who are soluting have odd costumes. They appear to be baggy (due to the folds), but if they are in fact baggy, then these people are insanely skinny.
    Voidborn citizens automatically have the captian's chair, but little actual power. Thus, Figurehead. :P

    Been meaning to upload this to smackjeeves, yeah, but haven't gotten around to it yet. >_>

    Plotty plottness will be comming in hordes very soon, no worries... Also, yeah his mouth is a bit FUBAR looking at it... As for skinny people, Odan (the guy) is supposed to be a skinny-ass fairy boy from space, but Eletha isn't. Thanks for pointing it out, this I'll have to fix... >_>

    Quote Originally Posted by Kodos
    Fuck year!
    Screw decade! >:u... :3

    MINI UPDATE;

    For great justice, VB now has a smackjeeves site.
    Last edited by Regantor; 01-10-2011 at 01:37 PM.

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    Fifty Fifty Member Evil_Cake's Avatar
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    is there a monument 1-3?

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    999 Knights Member Regantor's Avatar
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    There's a monument 1-11.

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    Fifty Fifty Member Evil_Cake's Avatar
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    o wow

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    Woah!!! this is good i tried making a manga about space fights it was just that i didnt have good ideas for ship designs.....
    kinda reminds me of homeworld and sins heh

    keep up the good work

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    Junior Member Ryousukethehappy's Avatar
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    HMMMM...now were have i seen that character from?!?

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    This new guy. Ohmahgawsh. Might be a favorite characte rI'm sensing. XD

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