I like. I allso fully support blaming cats for the bad things in life.
Hey, looking good, Kasey! Other than the critiques other people have given, I also have something to add. The dumpster on page two has a gradient into a texture. It's visually jarring to me, and I think if you left it black instead of fading to that earth tone, it would have given a better mood to the top two panels on the page by giving it a feeling of darkness.
I like the colors and style of the comic so far, though, and the background work is great.
I have one thing to say... *ahem*
ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY JEALOUS JEALOUS JEALLLLOUSSSS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaa*coughcough* *gack*
-that feeling when your rival mangaka is 9001x better than you-
@Psy: Thanks xD
@Seef: Ah, thanks for pointing that out! I'm still feeling a little bit awkward with coloring pages. In fact a little bit awkward with everything that goes into comic making, so I'm glad to have the crit :3 I'll keep that in mind and try it out on the page.
@Rei: Are we about to have another "my dick is smaller than yours" argument? :b
Sorry, guys been a little distracted lately. Page three is being colored, page four is inked, pages five and six are sketched. I plan to upload all of them at the same time later this week if I survive this week. I've been scheduled at work eight days in a row (6-8 hour shifts) so I don't have a lot of time on my hands OTL
Last edited by Total_Loser; 02-12-2012 at 01:20 PM.
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