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    Quote Originally Posted by ClockHand View Post
    I would have preferred to look the cover at the end.

    Principally because it might not make sense for us at the beginning, and secondly because it would be easier to critique it.

    PD: So yeah, always do the cover at the end.
    I agree. Mostly because I decided I really fucking hate this cover. From now on I'll draw them at the end of the chapter.
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    Hey, looking good, Kasey! Other than the critiques other people have given, I also have something to add. The dumpster on page two has a gradient into a texture. It's visually jarring to me, and I think if you left it black instead of fading to that earth tone, it would have given a better mood to the top two panels on the page by giving it a feeling of darkness.

    I like the colors and style of the comic so far, though, and the background work is great.

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    @Psy: Thanks xD
    @Seef: Ah, thanks for pointing that out! I'm still feeling a little bit awkward with coloring pages. In fact a little bit awkward with everything that goes into comic making, so I'm glad to have the crit :3 I'll keep that in mind and try it out on the page.
    @Rei: Are we about to have another "my dick is smaller than yours" argument? :b

    Sorry, guys been a little distracted lately. Page three is being colored, page four is inked, pages five and six are sketched. I plan to upload all of them at the same time later this week if I survive this week. I've been scheduled at work eight days in a row (6-8 hour shifts) so I don't have a lot of time on my hands OTL
    Last edited by Total_Loser; 02-12-2012 at 01:20 PM.
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